In retrospect, I pretty much hate what I wrote yesterday. It's all tell and no show. I wanted Valentine and Mirek to spend the scene displaying every stereotype I could think of while still remaining IC, but the exposition at the end is just clumsy and ridiculous. Sigh. I'll have to scrap it and retool it ( Read more... )

I wanted to write two different Valentine stories today (a before Tabula Rasa and an after TR), but my uterus had other ideas. Have some of this instead. Picks up right where this left off ( Read more... )

Jen, I am totally going to answer your question to Valentine soon (especially considering you are the only one who asked anything), I promise ( Read more... )

Sorry, this kind of picks up mid-scene. Everything I wrote before it is still kind of a mess and I'm working on ironing it out. All you need to know is that it's a few months into the program (maybe early winter) and everyone's memories are starting to come back little by little. Mirek's been trying to reconcile a few little pieces of memory in a ( Read more... )

Mirek is sick, part two. Most of this is SO AWFUL, but I forced myself to finish it. BEDTIME FOR KAITLYN ( Read more... )

This is part of halfway_nano. Or will be, eventually. I'm going to try and segue back into it once 14valentines is over because I promised I would and I'm determined to finish it. To be honest, the entire thing seems incredibly daunting to me on my own, which is ridiculous, I know, but with the security of someone to keep me in check gone... I dunno. I'm nervous ( Read more... )

"She's beautiful, Mueller," Valentine said dreamily. She hugged the open wine bottle to her chest, leaning heavily against Mirek's side. "She's just... I can't believe it, you know? That someone like her would even... and she's smart, she's a lawyer and when Crys invited me out that night I expected some quiet, dowdy little thing and not... god, ( Read more... )